山西省太原市2025-2026学年高二下学期7月期末考试英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

When I graduated from business school, I received several nice job offers. But my thoughts kept wandering back to my hometown in Peru, where blueberry bushes carpeted the hills, a sea of blue drawing tourists to take pictures. Memories came to my mind: Little me, barefoot, ran among bushes, watching neighbors gather berries in harvest seasons.

One sleepless night, I picked up an old poetry book and found Frost's lines: "I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." Those words cut straight to my heart. Early the next morning, I refused all offers and headed home.

My parents wrapped me in warm hugs at the door. We chatted happily over dinner as I told them my plan to run a blueberry business. Dad frowned (皱眉), "Blueberries are nothing rare. It might be hard to make money," he sighed. Mom had the same concern, but seeing my determined look, she nudged Dad. They agreed to let me try.

I spent days busy in Mom's kitchen. With her old recipe, I kept adjusting the flavors until I finally made jam and blueberry snacks that carried the familiar taste of my childhood. Full of hope, I set up a tiny stall (摊位) at the local market the following weekend.

Yet reality hit hard. In the burning sun, people walked by without a look. By sunset, I'd only sold three jars, tired and discouraged. Just then my elderly neighbor Evo came over and said, "Young man, use what you've learned in college." His words woke me up. I should sell the joy, not just fruit. Maybe our family's blueberry field was the very place to try my idea.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:I hurried back to tell my parents the big plan.

Paragraph 2: Tourists were flooding into my blueberry You-Pick farm.

参考范文（作答示例）

I hurried back to tell my parents the big plan. They hesitated at first, saying that turning our field into a picking site may harm the plants. I reasoned carefully planned route would do little harm to the plants and that selling berries alone earned little, yet selling joy could bring more value. Finally, they agreed. We then pulled out weeds, cut the bushes into shape, and planned new paths. Everything was ready! I posted the exciting news online.

Tourists were flooding into my blueberry You-Pick farm. They picked berries happily, tasted homemade snacks and took photos among blueberry bushes. My small business took off smoothly. Many left carrying boxes of berries and jars of jam as a reminder of their time in the field. The market frustration slowly lifted as the warm and lively scene unfolded before me. I recalled Frost's lines. The road less traveled led me back to my roots and blessed me with life's sweetest harvest.

Part 1 读后续写文本深度分析

一、文章类型分析

高考命题定位这是一篇典型的新高考成长励志类续写。

不同于单纯"帮助别人"或"亲情友情"主题：知识+创新+成长+乡村振兴

故事最大的特点就是：真正改变命运的不是坚持，而是创新。

二、续写整体构思

原文已经完成了前四步：

梦想（Dream）↓行动（Action）↓遇挫（Failure）↓点拨（Turning Point）

续写需要完成最后四步：

实施新方案↓游客喜欢↓生意成功↓升华主题

因此属于经典：

Problem → Inspiration → Action → Success → Theme

两段布局建议

第一段（解决问题）

重点回答：How did he turn the idea into reality?

建议写：① 回家告诉父母↓② 父母支持↓③ 全家一起准备采摘园↓④ 增加体验项目

例如：

·You-Pick 

·Jam-making 

·Picnic 

·Taking photos 

·Homemade snacks 

⑤ 宣传推广（college knowledge）

例如：

·Social media 

·Posters 

·Friends 

·Online promotion 

最后：游客即将到来。

形成衔接第二段。

第二段（结果+升华）

重点回答：What happened after tourists arrived?

建议：游客越来越多↓孩子采摘↓家庭体验↓大家拍照分享↓蓝莓食品热销↓父母高兴↓Evo夸奖↓

自己明白：We weren't selling blueberries.We were selling happiness.最后升华：Returning home truly made all the difference.最好呼应开头 Frost 的诗。

形成首尾呼应。

三、续写必须承接原文的地方

四、续写容易丢分的问题

（1）不要只写卖蓝莓

原文已经说明：sell the joy

所以不能继续：sold more jam否则没有创新。

（2）不要突然暴富

努力↓一点一点成功↓越来越多人

而不是：The next day everyone came.这种太假。

（3）突出体验经济

真正卖的是：

✔ Family memories

✔ Childhood

✔ Nature

✔ Experience

而不是水果。

（4）体现Business School

大学不能白读。

最好体现：

·advertisement 

·marketing 

·social media 

·branding 

·package 

这样照应全文。

五、故事核心脉络

毕业↓放弃高薪↓返乡↓创业↓产品滞销↓创新经营↓采摘体验↓游客爆满↓创业成功↓梦想实现

六、关键线索梳理

七、全文分析表

八、续写设计技巧

第一段建议加入

场景一

说服父母（体现家庭支持）

场景二

全家布置果园

例如：

·signs 

·baskets 

·tables 

·picnic area 

场景三

宣传

例如：

I designed colorful posters.

I posted photos online.

I invited local bloggers.

体现商业思维。

第二段建议加入

建议写：

游客：↓采摘↓拍照↓做果酱↓孩子欢笑↓朋友圈传播↓越来越多人↓蓝莓全部售空↓父母微笑↓Evo点赞↓呼应 Frost。

九、高分表达可提前准备

创业

·launch a business 

·start a family business 

·turn the field into... 

·build a brand 

创新

·think outside the box 

·create a unique experience 

·add value 

·offer more than products 

游客

·wander among blueberry bushes 

·fill the hillside with laughter 

·enjoy the picking experience 

·capture unforgettable moments 

成功

·business gradually picked up 

·word spread quickly 

·crowds poured in 

·our products sold out 

升华主题

可以采用以下思路：

We were no longer selling blueberries—we were sharing childhood memories and happiness.

或者：At that moment, I finally understood what Frost meant by "the road less traveled." Returning home and creating something meaningful had truly made all the difference.

十、苏格拉底式提问（引导学生梳理续写思路）

Part 2-1 读后续写高频语料

一、动作描写

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