原题:
假定你是李华,你校邀请英语教育专家Wilson教授进行了一场专题讲座。你负责本次活动公众号的推送,拟发布讲座现场视频片段,请你给他写一封电子邮件沟通相关事宜,内容包括:
(1)代表学校致谢;(2)说明发布视频的用意并征求许可。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Professor Wilson,
I'm Li Hua, in charge of covering today's event on the school WeChat Official Account.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作技巧
1. 如何让“致谢”更真诚?
· 具体化:不要只说“感谢讲座”,要提到“您的教学策略”“您的真实案例”等具体内容
· 表达影响:说讲座给学生/老师带来了什么收获(eye-opening, beneficial, inspiring)
2. 如何让“说明用意”更有说服力?
· 强调教育价值:不是为了流量,而是为了让更多师生受益
· 体现尊重:说明会精选内容、注明来源、不使用商业用途
· 提供审核机会:主动提出发布前给教授预览,体现合作态度
3. 如何体现“读者意识”?
· 礼貌为先:用“Would you kindly...”“May I ask for your permission...”等委婉表达
· 尊重对方选择:明确说明“如果您不同意,我们完全理解”
· 结尾再次感谢:让对方感受到真诚
语料
致谢
on behalf of the school 代表学校
sincere gratitude 诚挚感谢
insightful lecture 富有洞见的讲座
eye-opening / inspiring / beneficial 大开眼界的/鼓舞人心的/有益的
gain a lot from / benefit from 从中获益良多
视频相关
video clips / short clips 视频片段
post / upload / share 发布/上传/分享
key moments / selected highlights 关键时刻/精选亮点
credit the speaker 注明主讲人
征求许可
kindly allow / grant permission 允许/给予许可
may I ask for your permission 能否征得您的许可
would be grateful if... 如果……将不胜感激
promise not to... 承诺不……
for educational purposes 出于教育目的
non-commercial use 非商业用途
show for review before posting 发布前预览审核
结尾
look forward to your reply 期待您的回复
please feel free to let me know 请随时告诉我
warm regards / best wishes 诚挚问候/祝好
ONE POSSIBLE VERSION:
Dear Professor Wilson,
I’mLiHua,inchargeofcoveringtoday’seventontheschoolWeChatOfficialAccount.Onbehalfofour school,Iwouldliketoexpressoursinceregratitudefor your brilliantandinsightfullecture,whichhasgreatlyinspired both students and teachers.
Giventhevalueof yourphilosophyandguidance,webelievethelectureshouldreachawideraudiencebeyond our campus. We are, therefore, planning to postedited videoclipsonourofficialaccount. Wewouldbedeeplygratefulif youcouldgrantuspermissiontodoso.Pleaserestassuredthatallmaterialswillbeusedstrictly for non-profit educational purposes.
I’m looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Best wishes
Li Hua